12-03-2007, 01:54 AM
Alot of the stuff you have been posting is a tough read. Such as this item you copied from your PMs.
You jump between first and third person, you combine too many verbs with "and" alot of the time, and you start off alot of paragraphs with the word so.
Quote:So I am not implying I will sue you, not at all in the least. What I'm saying and mean (eg by "Exhibit A") is that here are the transcripts of the events leading to the insane person's misfortune, your honor. My clinet Mr. DIG was simply defending himself and here is the evidence. That's what I'm saying. That's what I said and meant and meant to get across.
You jump between first and third person, you combine too many verbs with "and" alot of the time, and you start off alot of paragraphs with the word so.