Need your opinion - Valentines song

Arpikarhu · 02-14-2002, 01:40 AM

every year my girl and i write each other a valentines poem.
it always ends up being something funny instead of all gooey and mushy. this year i wrote a song:

EM D
A bright purple mango

C G
flies through the air,

EM D
A walrus named Hilda

C D
is brushing her hair,

EM D
chocolate covered ashtrays

C G
sit high on the floor,

EM D
my left shoe plays pinochle

C D
on a cold scottish moor,

EM D
a light bulb talks politics

C G
with senator d'amato

EM D
while icebergs in norway

C D
share a tomato,

EM D
this song is very stupid

F# A
and not what i want to say,

C D
it should say i love you

EM G
and that your an awesome lay

What do you think?

Sean Cold · 02-14-2002, 01:42 AM

I think MayMay will love it actually. How cute, the first offical couple. Good, now we can spread rumours about you and shit!

Arpikarhu · 02-14-2002, 01:43 AM

but what did you think of the song?

The Sleeper · 02-14-2002, 01:46 AM

eh

Sean Cold · 02-14-2002, 01:46 AM

Funny shit, though, I thought it was funnier when they did this gag on friends.

Keyser Soze · 02-14-2002, 01:46 AM

Rip an mp3 of it, post a link to it, and then i'll really be impressed.

Arpikarhu · 02-14-2002, 01:47 AM

Keyser Soze Wrote:Rip an mp3 of it, post a link to it, and then i'll really be impressed.

the free world should never hear me sing

Keyser Soze · 02-14-2002, 01:50 AM

Pussy.

Sephiroth · 02-14-2002, 01:53 AM

Might I suggest a Haiku?

I love you more than
I can bear. Prepare for death.
Death is forever.

The Sleeper · 02-14-2002, 01:57 AM

:roflmao:

I'd go with Seph's

Danked · 02-14-2002, 01:58 AM

Turkey for me, turkey for you.
Wanna eat my turkey in a big, brown shoe.

wannabe...

Keyser Soze · 02-14-2002, 02:01 AM

Delicate frog
playing upon the road
cold breeze.

Edited By Keyser Soze on Feb. 13 2002 at 9:01

IkeaBoy · 02-14-2002, 02:28 AM

i can write better songs.

that's an insult.

Arpikarhu · 02-14-2002, 02:33 AM

IkeaBoy Wrote:i can write better songs.

that's an insult.

suck it, i was short on time. i thought it was cute. oh well.

Danked · 02-14-2002, 02:44 AM

Arpikarhu likes to masterbate with baby oil.
Oh, I like turkey on Thanksgiving...

Galt · 02-14-2002, 02:47 AM

I think the song will flow better if you take out the random letters you're going to have to sing every other line.

Arpikarhu · 02-14-2002, 02:48 AM

Galt Wrote:I think the song will flow better if you take out the random letters you're going to have to sing every other line.

i really hope that you are joking or i will be forced to kill you

Galt · 02-14-2002, 03:05 AM

Oh, I get it. It's a puzzle of some sort? Like a word jumble?

When she deciphers the code, you tell her what her real present is?

Arpikarhu · 02-14-2002, 03:08 AM

Galt Wrote:Oh, I get it. It's a puzzle of some sort? Like a word jumble?

When she deciphers the code, you tell her what her real present is?

i prefer Roarke so there! :p

Bondgirl · 02-14-2002, 02:14 PM

Arpikarhu Wrote:suck it, i was short on time. i thought it was cute. oh well.

It is cute, go for it Smile

Happy Valentines Day everyone Smile