05-14-2002, 03:34 PM
Wow, actually very impressive. Very nice wording. You didn't try and make it fancy. You wrote exactly as they might speak. Good explanations of the characters, I actually felt a part of the story.
BRAVO!
Now you're gonna tell us you didn't write it right?
BRAVO!
Now you're gonna tell us you didn't write it right?
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i want something good to die for, to make it beatiful to live</center>
i want something good to die for, to make it beatiful to live</center>