03-20-2009, 02:52 PM
Rock Monster Wrote:Krystal Wrote:No, because you weren't breaking the law (and that wasn't a run-on sentence; you just have one conjunction too many).
Therefore everyone in jail need to stay, because they did break the law. (too many conjunctions in turn make it a run-on sentence, doesn't it?... I suck at english!)
Yeah, but that would piss a bunch of people off (technically it's still not a run-on sentence because the thoughts are separated. The first 'and' should've just been a comma to denote 3 separate thoughts).
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