Right Now I'm........... (part deux)

[krystal]

When descriptions get in the way of the story, it's too descriptive. I don't need to know how green the grass is, the exact shapes of the blades, or how blue the sky is and the exact shapes of clouds to read a story. The excess imagery makes it disjointed, making it more difficult for me to imagine it. There should be an actual reason for the description as opposed to just putting words on paper. Pointless drivel should be edited out.