09-28-2007, 08:05 PM
Basically, make one point per sentence. It's a lot easier to reach than a three line sentence.
For instance, this:
and this:
Should have been broken up into way more than TWO FUCKING SENTENCES! How on earth do you expect to be a writer when it will take people 3 minutes to read each sentence since they'll have to go-back and reread them because they got lost halfway through?
For instance, this:
Quote:So I would really appreciate it if you could forward this email to the appropriate dept or individual, that is, the aforementioned who oversee or are responsible for designing, implementing, and/or executing card security as it pertains, specifically, to auditing new members' card activity and rendering decisions to freeze the card and/or change initially agreed upon terms, credit limits, etc just because the new clients use the card within the terms and parameters on which the card was issued and further your security department has seen fit to hijack back the services (the services that we as clients even bother to contact you in the first place, or you have solicited us to use)
and this:
Quote:So again I use use the card within said terms and parameters that YOU set, but all of a sudden that's a "high risk activity" to draw out for example $300 when your Cash Advance limit is $4,000 and therefore it's "logical" to create a pretext & policy to claim you have the right to revoke this service you solicited me for and said you can do for me. Just PONDEROUS -but I'M being the problem here, right?
Should have been broken up into way more than TWO FUCKING SENTENCES! How on earth do you expect to be a writer when it will take people 3 minutes to read each sentence since they'll have to go-back and reread them because they got lost halfway through?