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I too wrote a story
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All jokes aside, this story is light years ahead of it's competitor. I really felt the narrator's pain as he met with Nigel and the bastard Filon. I feel that the dramatic turning point was when the author let us in on the fact that the narrator, through all his fruits and labors, may not be the rightful owner. I was on the edge of my seat. Then I get to the end and realize that the story is in fact a symbolic representation of America in the 21st century. Good land to harvest! Rich opportunities for all. Make lots of profits. Then the aliens (gov't?) came and blew everything up. Good show Titan, good show!
Well, I guess that we all learned a lesson today. That it's what's inside a person that counts. And that on the inside, midgets are thieving little bastards.
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